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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
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0 posted 2009-12-07 11:45 AM


It was a cold start in
the middle of fall. the sun
was there, but the wind blew
it's warmth to the north. I was in
the car with my sister,
as we drive to the westside
of our gray city. My heart was racing,
my blood pumping for
an exit route. As my sister
ask "are you ok"? I
look with a smile and words
I used many times,
with no pure meaning. I stare out
with eyes like a doe, heart
like a hummingbird. We finally reach
my destination, sweat lays
on my fingers, as I'm greeted
by my uncle. He smiles, I smile
with a heavy heart.
We enter my cousin's house,
my soul unsettle. In the meeting
of my father.


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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-12-07 02:44 PM


enjoyed it, a vivid descrition of thoughing moments.

regards

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-12-07 03:59 PM


You rendered the anxious anticipation of this important encounter very well.

Love,
Margherita

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