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Square Peg.

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viking_metal
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since 02-02-2007
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


0 posted 12-06-2009 08:08 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal


I tasted the sex from the heartbeat
in your lean neck
and took a taste with my teeth and tongue

you asked me if that was supposed to fit
and I laughed
because that was the perfect blend
of woman and liquor

but you were serious
and that was the end of it
right there.


Dang.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 12-07-2009 09:24 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

You dared too much! Try with a little tenderness ...

Well rendered defeat.

Love,
Margherita
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


2 posted 12-07-2009 10:55 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks margorius pargoritum.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

passing shadows
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displaced


3 posted 12-07-2009 12:23 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh well

shrug it off

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


4 posted 12-07-2009 04:27 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

yup.
Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan


5 posted 07-31-2010 04:18 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I like your writing when it is at its most honest.  Dang this was good.
 
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