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0 posted 2009-12-06 04:38 AM


Through the jungle
I can feel the blades of grass
Under my feet
And the sweet melody
Singing me to sleep

Hey birds...

Won't you sing, just a bit louder?
Won't you accompany the trees?
They whistle with the tune, the leaves joining in harmony...

Hey stone...

Won't you become just a bit softer?
Though the carpet you lay on, kisses me gently
You are quite rough,
So simply...
Won't you become, just a bit softer?

"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."

"Hold faithfulness and sincerity as first principles."

-Confucius

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GBride
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1 posted 2009-12-10 07:05 PM


This is a wonderful poem!
I liked every line. I just wish I had your imagination!

Alison
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2 posted 2009-12-22 06:22 PM


I really enjoy your poetry

Merry Christmas.

Alison

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