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vandana
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0 posted 2009-12-04 06:23 PM



Our Love Is Strong


Don't you see
Into my eyes,
It shows
every time we come by
And yet we feel our love
Isn't strong,
We get apart,
Like a flower petal falls,
Every time ,
I hear you call,
Let me know you,
Love,
Eyes,
Love Is strong,
As long as we stay alive,
No one will hurt us,
Our love Is strong,
Like a sun goes around the world,
Yet ,
We feel love Isn't enough
to light our eyes to shine,
But I do feel love
Is enough ,
Our hearts belong to
one another

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2009-12-05 09:45 AM


There is much strength in your heart and a sureness of the love you share.

Good to read you, v~

Magnus
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2 posted 2009-12-05 12:22 PM


The flames still burn ever bright for you...
May they never dwindle.

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-12-06 10:47 AM


Hi Vandana, love is sure and sharing it is a bless, I love the uncertainty of your poem and the way you express Love...Thanks for the enjoyable read.

yann

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-12-07 01:05 AM


vandana - great write with deep emotional feelings intertwined...

BC

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-12-07 09:26 AM


You have the right idea of  love, dear Vandana. Beautifully expressed trust.

Love,
Margherita

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