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La route |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
La route, it is the name of the girl whom I can’t forget, it is a smile in a supermarket at the electricals department. La route it is the time which we spend listening to a child who lies to you, it is the coffee that we drink in a dark bar of Tennessee. La route, it is the tears which do not exist and which we know nevertheless, it is the shaked hand of the Brazilian who indicates you the way to Ipanema. La route it is the time which we spend listening to grandfather, it is the woman in the penetrating glance who invites you in her thoughts. La route, it is you knowing me, it is you who builds it on my verses, on the words, on the independence of faces, La route, it is the multitude of my liberties. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awww this is lovely i enjoyed reading this thank you for sharing this with us  |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
huh! An intriguing write, Yann, REALLY enjoyed it! La Route, is something I am pondering at the moment. I am planning a trip to Pakistan, trying to decide on the route, via Prague & Istanbul or Cairo or New Delhi/Mumbi... Interesting Yann, interesting indeed. ~Brad |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
La Route brings so many precious moments and I enjoyed your excellent sharing of your emotions, dear Yann! Very very nice. Love, margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow, this is fabulous. I really loved every sentimental thought and verse. A grand poem, my very favorite of yours!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Annie for the kind words and supportive comment best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Brad, thanks for the comment, you will do a magnificent travel, I guess the south road by Cairo and Mumbai is more exotic, it is really awesome to do such a trip... best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Margherita, this is so kind. have a sweet evening yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks BS, this is so kind, I guess that while we take la route, the more important is the sentiments. have a nice evening. yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey islander, Just call me bluesy, BS sounds so full of it!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: This just makes me pause. I love this line - and you know that I always enjoy your poetry, yann. A |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Yann an unusual poem my friend but well put together, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Yann - great write, like the way it flows, and the words that you used... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very unique and creative! LOVE IT! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
oops Bluesy, will remember, thanks for the comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear alison, your comments are so warm and welcomed, I appreciate your reads and your so kind words. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Lindsay for the constructive apptreciation, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Bill for the well expressed and comforting comment, I am glad you liked the poem. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks passing shadows for the read and comment, I enjoy you read my poem. regards yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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