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After Hour Dreams

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


0 posted 12-03-2009 08:55 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for BluesSerenade


~*~
You were my summer mystery.
A heat wave
drawing me in
with your succulent
sweet
seduction
sweltering.
You were the blue moon rising
setting the stage in overtones
a rendezvous review
after hour dreams.

~*~
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Margherita
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1 posted 12-04-2009 04:42 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Oh, so gloriously romantic, dear Lori!

A little gem!

Love,
Margherita
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 12-04-2009 07:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms bluezy...
after OUR dreams?

enjoyed you here
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 12-04-2009 09:54 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Thank you for being so gracious and for always taking the time to read me, Margherita.

Ummm D~  What goes on after hours stays that way. Ours and hours goes both ways. Thanks for looking.
vandana
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4 posted 12-04-2009 06:21 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

liked it
ctowen
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5 posted 12-04-2009 06:49 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

I have had hours run into hours but not quite like these, lol!  : )


  CT
Capricious
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6 posted 12-04-2009 07:07 PM       View Profile for Capricious   Email Capricious   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Capricious

"you were my summer mystery"

Perfect beginning.  So much said in so few words.

Neat and sweet, enjoyed the read.
Magnus
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7 posted 12-04-2009 10:51 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Such a smile...  well done dear lady.
BluesSerenade
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8 posted 12-05-2009 09:50 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Thank you for stopping by everyone.
It does my heart good to read your nice replies.
Marchmadness
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9 posted 12-05-2009 06:16 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Your romantic poetry is excellent, Lori.
                                Ida
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


10 posted 12-05-2009 06:54 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a lovely, tender write, Lori


M
BluesSerenade
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11 posted 12-06-2009 01:07 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

  Thanks M and Ida~ and to everyone who took the time.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


12 posted 12-07-2009 12:56 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Bluesy - I bet you are so Bluesy and full of rythmn. Sensuous poem, liked it a lot...

BC
2islander2
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13 posted 12-07-2009 07:11 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hello Bluesy, this is so romantic, a very enjoyable read.

yann
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14 posted 12-07-2009 09:53 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Yums. *G* This is delightful and delicious! *S*
passing shadows
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displaced


15 posted 12-07-2009 12:26 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

made me sigh
miscellanea
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OH


16 posted 12-14-2009 08:23 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

Hi Bluesy!

    It's great to read this sensuous poem!  I could pass up a title like that without checking it out, and I'm glad I did!  Awesome!

            misce'
The Lady
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17 posted 12-15-2009 12:23 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



ahhh Lori

your alliteration sizzles....

"with your succulent
sweet
seduction
sweltering."

ctowen
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18 posted 12-26-2009 03:48 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

May I, unconditionally, bump you?   : )


   CT
BluesSerenade
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19 posted 12-27-2009 12:43 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

  Many thanks to all of you.
secondhanddreampoet
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20 posted 12-28-2009 09:31 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine and 'steamy' !

applause for this effective 'penning' !
jwesley
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21 posted 12-29-2009 09:07 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

...left in hollows on the the beach
as we went our separate ways.
So strong the heart, so fleeting the heat,
so lasting the memories.

Much enjoyed...

j.

Chalmette Guy
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22 posted 12-29-2009 11:47 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

I enjoy your alliteration.

And more poems need the word "succulent" in them. lol
Goldenrose
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23 posted 12-29-2009 08:19 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

it is good to sit awhile and think back to the fondest memories like this, sweltering seduction sounds like you enjoyed it imensely as i did reading it, thank you for sharing it...

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

BluesSerenade
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24 posted 12-30-2009 08:00 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Thank you for leaving your warm words in reply.
Each one of you make me smile so bright!!

Happy New year, one and all!!
 
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