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Fade
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane

0 posted 2009-11-29 11:18 PM



Killing time has
Always been a habit for me.
Now it seems like my
Days are more full of meaning
And I am thankful for you, my
Companion, my friend, my sister. Oh
Eve, would you be my own flesh?

Can we kill a little time together now?
A few old wounds will need to heal. As
Life marches own, I know they will, so
Easy does it. We're in no hurry after all.
All we have to do is live and love until Jesus
  comes to get us.

Can the world
Hold us?
I doubt it.
Leaving here will be the greatest trip.
Down to the last moment - before
Eternity swallows up time - May I find
Repose in the heart of my
Sweetest dream. You are my sweetest dream.


                                            

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-30 09:51 AM


When there is love, time is always well spent.

"Killing the time" is a risk factor actually ... there is so much to do down here ... to spread love, to increase knowledge, to enjoy the beauty of Nature etc. etc. ...

And Jesus is a beautiful companion for every day, not just on the last day ...

Nice write.

Love,
Margherita


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