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Open Poetry #45

Summon New Dreams

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-11-28 02:31 AM

It's been a week since the betrayal
there are no tears
no heartbreak
just thoughts of what might have been

no verse flows
the rhythm is gone
the rhyme is fleeting
and the reasons are
the reasons are...
the reason is

not evident
unspoken
silence is all I feed upon

potential rebound actions
are losing their lustre

the urge to make her
the girl that sent a man
halfway 'round the world

seems...

seems poetic

but dumb

The Earth is a big shiny place again
go anywhere, just point on the globe
destination unknown, ready to launch
and nothing seems appealing

but what might have been

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

1 posted 2009-11-28 11:22 AM

Thoughtful and affecting, like a memory of my own. Very well written.

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2009-12-01 10:00 PM

Oh boy, you've expressed the hurt and forlorn feeling so well,
and have such a great style of writing about you.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2009-12-01 10:07 PM

Thanks, Blues! Well, looking back does no good, so moving on... Right now I am looking at a month long trip going from Dallas-Chicago-Munich-Prague-London-Istanbul-Karachi Pakistan-Istanbul-London-Prague-Dusseldorf-Chicago-Dallas

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