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Martie
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0 posted 2009-11-27 06:29 PM


I still talk to people frequently who do not know about Reye's Syndrome. During this flu season it is especially important to be informed and to make sure your teenagers are also.  I am posting this poem and link to information about the disease for that reason.
www.reyessyndrome.org


Someone’s Child
(in memory of Michelle)


I read there was a miracle child
undead
I saw her smile from the newsprint
her dark hair curled

I could not read
the screams that had rained on her spring
with no sound
her heart slowing to almost stop
again and again
and sleep far deeper than night

Those who loved her must have wished
her free of life
in their secret souls
lost hope to weight
that crushed inside
till death was in their eyes

But
she lived
through the scream
the unimagined soundless terror
and found her way
in darkness
with no breath
fought her way through chance
and lived.

My own gamine girl
took to death so quickly
that same year
that same spring
holding the same soundless scream
inside her.

Oh I would be the mother
of a miracle child
and not me

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Those of you who know me, know that I don't really wish to be someone's elses mother.  Being Michelle's mother was a gift I'll always be grateful for.

My friends Rosemary and Dale Gwaltney (both Pip members) have a website for those who are bereaved.  Michelle has a room there if anyone would like to read more poems about her and see some photos.   http://www.angelfire.com/zine/bereaved/michelleopen.html  

[This message has been edited by Martie (11-27-2009 09:38 PM).]

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latearrival
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1 posted 2009-11-27 07:48 PM


Martie,I had to go back once again and read and look upon the face of that gentle child. You have  created a beautiful memory for Michelle. And how wonderful of Rosemary and Dale Gwaltney to set up this space for you and  your little one. Sincerely jo
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-11-27 08:07 PM


Martie - so heartwarming, and this write brought tears to my eyes...

Bc

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3 posted 2009-11-29 03:55 PM


Yes, God wouldn't have it any other way, he chose you to be Michelle's Mom!!

Thank you for always bringing her here, Martie.

Your poetry is lovely and heartfelt.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2009-11-29 09:11 PM


With all of the new strains of illnesses to be worried over, this still is one of the all-time great worries. Now we have other worries, and this was a "grand" weekend of worry. But I've heard tonight that "all is well", so once again, we lucked out.

The children of our grands all take care, but you are one of those who know that all of our caring may not always be enough.



Your more than timely repost, sissie, is always a call to awareness. Bless you!


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5 posted 2009-11-30 11:39 AM


Thank you, dear Martie, your words touch deeply. Such a beautiful child your little Michelle and there are no words that might ever bring comfort for her loss.

But what you do will help diminish the numbers of victims of this terrible disease.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-12-05 03:04 PM


Martie,

I have been continually moved by your poetry to Michelle - yet today, I am even more so.  The message behind your poem is important and I am moved to tears by your site for Michelle.  You both are forever beautiful in my mind - beautiful in spirit and smiles.

Alison

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7 posted 2009-12-05 04:49 PM


Thanx dear one,  yu always have your ears to
the rails...

Hugs

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2009-12-05 06:57 PM


Your words "gift" us, Martie


M

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9 posted 2009-12-13 06:21 PM




Martie

your "Michelle" poems always move me to tears

thank you for this one.


OwlSA
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10 posted 2009-12-16 01:27 AM


Martie, the tears are streaming down my face.  I know it doesn't get any easier.  Time doesn't heal.  

A beautiful poem, and so full of love.

I would go on to the website, but am going to be busy with Daisy most of the day.  She was a little stronger yesterday, and it looks as though she is going to be a little better still today.  I just wish her back legs would strengthen soon, enough to walk by herself.  

Owl

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11 posted 2009-12-16 01:28 AM


I meant Rosemary and Dale's website.  I have been on Michelle's many times.

Owl

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