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Open Poetry #45

Petals

20toes
Junior Member

since 2009-07-26

Posts 42
AZ, USA

0 posted 2009-11-24 05:59 PM

Petals

The time has come

The time is now

I spoke before

But now somehow

I feel alone

More lost than before

The trouble you caused

Is back at my door

I tried to forget

I tried to move on

But as time goes by

I feel more wrong

What should have been

Should I have done

I was so small

I was so young

When I look at her

And see inside

I rest assured

I know you lied

What would now be

If it weren't for me

Would you conceal

Or would you reveal

Now you are grown

And so am I

I write this now

As my final goodbye

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-26 06:40 AM

It's good to move ahead, but not without forgiving. We all learn some lessons along the Path.

This is very well written, I like your stile, it has good rhythm.

Love,
Margherita

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