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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-11-23 06:14 PM


If the Last Angel Falls

How long will love exist
in a world that can not resist
the spread of evilness?
The unrestrained pain,
the darkness of the rain,
the hardness of the ground
of angels crashing down.
For it was love,
the hope of love
the desires of love,
the fact that love existed,
that fueled the power
of their resistance.
Only hate and hell
and suffering and pain
will remain in unison
with nothing good at all
if the last angel falls.

JamesLee
22November
2009



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-11-23 11:06 PM


James, we should all band together in a circle of love and keep the angels from crashing to the ground in despair!

Love makes the world go 'roundd and keeps t angel wings aloft!


Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-11-24 10:12 AM


We need to focus on all the Angels, especially the Earth Angels (yes just like our sweet Linda!) who live to spread the message of love ...

Great awakening to Love is taking place and by putting aside fear we eliminate the ground on which evil grows.

Dear James, dear Linda, yes let's hold hands and sing the song of praise for all the love angels to remain safely perched on the extensions of our hearts ...

Love,
Margherita

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

3 posted 2009-11-24 11:04 AM


Another beautiful write, James.
Where do you find that creativity.
Do we dare to tread into that land to change us all: the land of God's pure love.
Can we learn to love our enemies.
It's hard to do: to love those that attack us, put us down, kill our children.
Humans cannot do this alone.
Great Write, but you know that already.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-11-24 01:20 PM


A deeper look at love. I like this very much, James.
                               Ida

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2009-11-25 09:41 PM



Only hate and hell
and suffering and pain
will remain in unison
with nothing good at all
if the last angel falls.

Lets all hope that never happens James.

Lindsay

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