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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-11-23 01:49 AM

I loaved a girl once, twice,
ten thousand times more
than she ever loaved me back

We ryed and ryed
it never worked out.
She wanted the wheat split-top,
but I came whole grain
and unapologetic.

I decided to make myself believe
that all I loved were her buns
and that made it easier
to turn just as sourdough
as she had always been.

_______________________
Bad Habits.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-11-23 06:56 AM

lightly laughing this morning, Paul~~ a good one

M

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-11-23 12:54 PM

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-11-23 01:09 PM

this was too cute!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-11-23 01:54 PM

You have raised the dough well with your fantasy!
It is quite unique and funny!

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-11-23 09:30 PM

SEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OH MY GOSH -- I've missed you! Where have you been? You ignorin' mah emails, woman? Thanks for reading. I am glad you liked it.

Margo, you never fail to read a poem.

Thanks so very much.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2009-11-24 12:15 PM

Wonderful wit and "ryebald" humor. I'd take honeybuns over sourdough anyday...

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2009-11-24 12:25 PM

I knead to read poetry that gets a rise out of me. You melt my crusty exterior to show the soft-as-dough interior of my heart.

Paul, your poetry makes me bake - as if you have turned my oven up to 350 degrees. Your poetry rolls me over with awe.

xoxoxo
A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2009-11-24 12:26 PM

Oh, but surely you both got at least a rise out of the other!
Another slice in the life of the Viking!
My advice to you is to 'roll' with the punches!
Please excuse my groaners. The hour is late and my brain is half-baked.

Be careful where you sow your wild oats!

Linda

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2009-11-24 12:39 PM

Paul, check your email

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

10 posted 2009-11-24 04:41 AM

lassy... thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Alison... love youuuuu... har.

Thanks for reading, dearest alahumor.

Earth angel, earth angel... thanks. groaners are good in certain circumstances. hahahaaaaaa...

sea... <3
Paulus Maxiums

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2009-11-28 05:36 PM

Giggles...you really "rose to the occassion!" This was very delicate to the senses, and I enjoy your wit, very much!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

12 posted 2009-11-28 08:56 PM

Aw gee thanks TD. <3

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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