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In silence we walk

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Margherita
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* * *
In silence we walk,
fingers entwined.
Feet immerse deep
in puddles of memories.

Single drops splash
onto our skin.
Awareness fills us
to the brim.

Sunrays sit
on our shoulders
to eavesdrop
on our soulsí talk.

We bask in the warmth
of immeasurable love.

In silence we walk ...
* * *
© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 11-21-2009 11:55 AM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Lovely thoughts, that you articulate with precision and artful brush.
Alison
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2 posted 11-21-2009 02:13 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Margherita,

This touches me deeply.  It partners perfectly with where I am at mentally right now.  Pooetry is a gift that taps into our thoughts and emotions.

Thank you for this -

Love,
Alison
Misty Lilacs
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3 posted 11-21-2009 02:48 PM       View Profile for Misty Lilacs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Misty Lilacs

I really like this. Makes mw want to go and snuggle with my Hon.

ooxx   Marti

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Honeybunch
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4 posted 11-21-2009 03:10 PM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

Lovely, Margherita.  Silence can say so much to those who can hear but even those who can most times don't even know that they are hearing.  Beautiful picture!

Love
Helen
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5 posted 11-21-2009 04:59 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

*sigh*... so very beautiful!!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 11-21-2009 06:28 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A pleasure to read...James
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May I say: I loved your poem, but the picture didn't work. I wanted it to be me and her, but I'm nowhere near him and she isn't quite her.
LindsayP
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8 posted 11-21-2009 07:06 PM       View Profile for LindsayP   Email LindsayP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LindsayP


Dear Margherita, what a lovely romantic
poem you have written here dear friend

that's enhanced by your beautiful picture.
top marks for this one. Love.

Lindsay
nourzihane
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9 posted 11-22-2009 03:41 AM       View Profile for nourzihane   Email nourzihane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nourzihane

My dear Margherita

wonderful pic is very romantic
thank you we hope more

My respect
Nourzihane
shalisadefa
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two people totally in sinc with one another
appreciating each others company
no need for words
the universe quietly
enjoying the moment
Magnus
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11 posted 11-22-2009 08:03 AM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Very nice, love the thought....Now, if only
I could find the water.........
2islander2
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12 posted 11-22-2009 01:04 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

dear Margherita, in silence we walk but this silence means more than fast or empty words, I love your poem, its warm intimacy and its charm. Makes me think of the liverpool's soccer motto: YOU NEVER WALK ALONE, outstanding song.

bravo

yann  
Margherita
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13 posted 11-23-2009 12:06 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you all from my heart!
Love,
Margherita
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lovely presentation and words

M
Marchmadness
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15 posted 11-23-2009 05:46 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

You do romantic poetry better than anyone I know, Margharita.
                                  Ida
Earth Angel
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16 posted 11-23-2009 11:34 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

My dear Dolphina, this poem is serenely lovely. I find that communing in silence with a loved one, can bring incedible feelings of closeness.I'm also a hand-holder! It is almost like holding hearts.

I adored the feelings that your poems has evoked in me. You are love personified, my dear friend.


Linda
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Very beautiful poem.
Earl Brinkman
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18 posted 05-27-2010 03:44 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Beautiful thoughts with a gorgeous photo.
 
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