navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » In silence we walk
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic In silence we walk Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2009-11-21 09:46 AM






* * *
In silence we walk,
fingers entwined.
Feet immerse deep
in puddles of memories.

Single drops splash
onto our skin.
Awareness fills us
to the brim.

Sunrays sit
on our shoulders
to eavesdrop
on our souls’ talk.

We bask in the warmth
of immeasurable love.

In silence we walk ...
* * *

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2009-11-21 11:55 AM


Lovely thoughts, that you articulate with precision and artful brush.
Alison
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
2 posted 2009-11-21 02:13 PM


Margherita,

This touches me deeply.  It partners perfectly with where I am at mentally right now.  Pooetry is a gift that taps into our thoughts and emotions.

Thank you for this -

Love,
Alison

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060
White Birch Forest
3 posted 2009-11-21 02:48 PM


I really like this. Makes mw want to go and snuggle with my Hon.

ooxx   Marti

________________________
I do the MS Walk everyday!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2009-11-21 03:10 PM


Lovely, Margherita.  Silence can say so much to those who can hear but even those who can most times don't even know that they are hearing.  Beautiful picture!

Love
Helen

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
5 posted 2009-11-21 04:59 PM


*sigh*... so very beautiful!!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2009-11-21 06:28 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Osprey
Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249

7 posted 2009-11-21 07:00 PM


May I say: I loved your poem, but the picture didn't work. I wanted it to be me and her, but I'm nowhere near him and she isn't quite her.
LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
8 posted 2009-11-21 07:06 PM



Dear Margherita, what a lovely romantic
poem you have written here dear friend

that's enhanced by your beautiful picture.
top marks for this one. Love.

Lindsay

nourzihane
Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254
Algeria
9 posted 2009-11-22 03:41 AM


My dear Margherita

wonderful pic is very romantic
thank you we hope more

My respect
Nourzihane

shalisadefa
Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114

10 posted 2009-11-22 07:47 AM


two people totally in sinc with one another
appreciating each others company
no need for words
the universe quietly
enjoying the moment

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
11 posted 2009-11-22 08:03 AM


Very nice, love the thought....Now, if only
I could find the water.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
12 posted 2009-11-22 01:04 PM


dear Margherita, in silence we walk but this silence means more than fast or empty words, I love your poem, its warm intimacy and its charm. Makes me think of the liverpool's soccer motto: YOU NEVER WALK ALONE, outstanding song.

bravo

yann  

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
13 posted 2009-11-23 12:06 PM


Thank you all from my heart!
Love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
14 posted 2009-11-23 07:02 AM


lovely presentation and words

M

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
15 posted 2009-11-23 05:46 PM


You do romantic poetry better than anyone I know, Margharita.
                                  Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
16 posted 2009-11-23 11:34 PM


My dear Dolphina, this poem is serenely lovely. I find that communing in silence with a loved one, can bring incedible feelings of closeness.I'm also a hand-holder! It is almost like holding hearts.

I adored the feelings that your poems has evoked in me. You are love personified, my dear friend.


Linda

Lamar Cole
Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274

17 posted 2010-05-10 05:08 PM


Very beautiful poem.
Earl Brinkman
Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
18 posted 2010-05-27 03:44 AM


Beautiful thoughts with a gorgeous photo.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » In silence we walk

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary