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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2009-11-19 08:48 PM



Take my conscience
Bare my soul
Strip these chains
That control
I surrender

Remove the blindfold
Let me see
Taste the passion
running through me
I surrender

Remove these ties
That hold me down
set me free
To the sound
Of pleasure
I surrender

With lines that bleed
From scrapes I need
No longer tied
To you I confide
I surrender

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-20 04:31 PM


In surrendering we find peace.

Beautifully done.

Love,
Margherita

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