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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2009-11-19 08:42 PM



We wake to the sound
Of a beating heart
Holding on tight
Deceptions are lost
We are blessed

Blessed for more reasons
Than we'll ever find
The touching of fingers
Much smaller than mine
The smile on small faces
The sound of their cries
The need that they give us
cannot be denied
The way that they hold us
Blocking our way
To get the attention
That drives them to see
That thier every mood
is important to me

so stop take a look
at all thats around
These visions of life
Are just a few
that are found
We are Blessed


© Copyright 2009 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-20 04:30 PM


Most beautiful, dear Richard! Yes, we are blessed!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2009-11-24 06:21 PM


Fine writing...James
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