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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2009-11-19 09:30 AM


There is distant light on her face;
Of the way her heart was displaced;
she knows just because of the way he goes on;
To the special somewhere in a far off place.

The casted way of all the pieces;
Gone to so simple words;
Where love’s creation has forgotten the shape of the water;
Each night releasing a greater temptation – the deep water in their souls.

Of the roses given to their demons;
The words of lost time;
They scatter and flee before each others eyes;
What has made them fly has made stone graves and voices.

When that one candles appears;
The pieces bind itself to magical forces;
Where rivers run wild and rampant;
Each can no longer trust each other or be friends.
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[This message has been edited by Laverne Pacquire (11-21-2009 05:57 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-11-19 12:47 PM


Very nice!

Love,
Margherita

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