navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Restless
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic Restless Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Star
Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-11-19 12:37 PM



Restless

Tossing and turning,
I lye alone in my bed.
Every thought begins to resurface,
cramming to fit in my head.
An ache I can't comprehend,
a feeling that is uneasy.
I just want to break free
and rid of my restlessness.

Lana
© Copyright 2009 Dark Star - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-19 02:08 PM


Dear Lana, you have rendered your restlessness very well. And no doubt many can relate. What about Yoga?

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-11-19 02:22 PM


I hate that feeling.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2009-11-19 06:45 PM


You are doing the best thing, release your feelings, exorcise them onto paper, keep the words, dont post them,leave them and come back to them with fresh eyes, edit them, alter them when and if you feel like it...write others like this....only through cathartic actions will you set your demons free...go outdoors to nature...see, feel and write down what is in front of you..only nature can begin the healing on the inside...enjoyed this write but hope you are feeling better soon...

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
4 posted 2009-11-20 04:29 AM


I love the suggestions in Goldenrose's comment.  It is so hard to be still when your mind is agitated.  It makes me think of my old washing machine that always jumped and knocked out of balance. I have felt that way too many times. Ya have to find a way to turn it off!     
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Restless

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary