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Eirian
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since 2009-04-13
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0 posted 2009-11-17 05:58 AM



I’ll see you in September,
Those words, they lift my heart
I hold them tightly to my chest
To keep from falling apart

Too long since I have seen your face
Or felt the tickle of your beard
Too long since I have kissed your lips
Or into your eyes I’ve peered

There is an aching in my heart
A tugging, I’m sure you can feel
It keeps a constant vigil here
It reminds me our separation is real

Yet often there are moments
When I sit and recall your face,
The way you looked when you held me
In a long and loving embrace

Yes, I miss you very deeply
But for now I’ll just have to remember
Those hands that soon will caress me again
When I see you in September.....

© Copyright 2009 Sharree Vitnell - All Rights Reserved
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-11-17 06:33 AM


This is beautiful and brought tears to my eyes
Excellently written and i could see the whole image as it unfolded
Well penned

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2009-11-20 11:41 PM


Nice...September is far away...James
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