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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2009-11-17 03:19 AM


I’m not a woman in love
stroking the edge of desire
and feeling the folds of passion
unwrap at the merest touch.

I’m simply a woman, an ordinary one,
possessed by the spirit of love
and that possession not evil or mean
but a millstone around my neck.

So where is the axe, the hammer, chisel,
to break it down bit by bit?
They’re hidden, you see, by the spirit
in a place where I dare not go
for fear of severe reprisals.

But, oh, of the spirit it has no regard
or empathy for the alive
yet there’s a plan and agenda
somewhere in its devious mind.

Cut it and slash it and make it not be
and then I’m a woman free!!
  
Helen / 17 November 2009


© Copyright 2009 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-11-17 03:52 AM


Free those chains that bind! Fly high, unencumbered and free!

(That's sometimes one heckuvvalot easier said than done! )

Happy flying!

Love & a warm hug,
Linda

anniepimm54
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2 posted 2009-11-17 06:37 AM



Hi Lovely poem very well written
Thank you very much for sharing it with us  

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2009-11-17 06:39 AM


  Linda - Thanks. At the moment I would just be happy with walking unencumbered!  When that's done I'll think about flying - don't know where to yet but I do know that it will be!


Helen

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2009-11-17 06:45 AM


My pleasure, anniepimm.  Thanks for reading and for commenting.  I remember when I was 54 and what came the year thereafter and now 10 years later everything has changed but so much is still the same.  

Helen

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-11-17 12:35 PM


I hear you, Helen. I remember 54 and now, 11 years later, much has changed and much is still the same.
                                   Ida

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2009-11-17 04:54 PM


Me, too!

sighing~~ when I would rather be flying~~somewhere


M

LindsayP
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7 posted 2009-11-17 07:57 PM



That is the way life is dear Helen, some things do change and other things stay the

way they are. I do hope it is the good things that stay the same with you. Love
and a big hug.

Lindsay

Magnus
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8 posted 2009-11-17 08:00 PM


Nicely written...your words say a lot of
your feelings...a lot.

Honeybunch
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9 posted 2009-11-18 02:54 AM


Thanks Ida, M, Lindsay and Magnus.  I guess if we don't "feel" things then they simply do not exist to an individual.  What else but feelings make things stick?  

Helen

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-11-18 05:56 AM


I would say that the "spirit of love" is ethereal and lifts us up into the upper spheres of existence, can't imagine it as a millstone around your neck, dear Helen! Of course if you are speaking of a particular  "attachment" things change. Look at it with tender "detachment" and listen to the song of your heart who requires free space to diffuse its multiple gifts. "Unchain my heart" comes to mind, lol!

Your ponderings become our ponderings, dear Helen. You excell in them.

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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11 posted 2009-11-18 06:03 AM


Thank you, dear Margherita.  You are so very wise!  "Unchain my heart" - yes, indeed.  That's what is required and if it's gonna be, it's up to me!  I seem to remember thinking that years ago.  Must be a blockage between myself and the spirit that prevents the message getting through!  

Love
Helen

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