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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-11-16 05:23 PM




Gotta Get You
Into My Life


People stay
when they
run out
of reasons
to run away.


JamesLee
15November
2009








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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-11-16 05:35 PM


hmm...not so sure I agree...some stay for the "better" or caring of one another (even if there may be reasons others would think they should leave)

just thinking here

M



jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2009-11-16 10:29 PM


Ah, but James is right my friend NT...are not your words not in the catagory of ... reasons to NOT run away, and so ...they've run out of reasons to run away...

Well done James

j.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2009-11-17 09:03 PM


Thank you nakdthoughts and jwesley for the wonderful responses...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-11-18 08:55 AM


As we all have a great instinct to escape into freedom, there must be good reasons to stay ...
I am so sure you provide them, dear James!

Love,
Margherita

Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
5 posted 2009-11-18 01:51 PM


this is cool.
i agree with this...not for every relationship, but for a decent amount i'd say this is true. and it's true for good and bad reasons. you could really dissect this little poem. you crammed a lot in so few words. good stuff!

Joe

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