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Open Poetry #45

Rhapsody Redolent of Remy

DrFaustus
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since 2009-11-16

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Colorado

0 posted 2009-11-16 11:26 AM

She is a solar flame
bursting cosmic
from an Enigmatic
brilliant source
Dazzling and beatifying
all She encounters
or a whirlwind
pure of passion
unrestrained celebration
of libertine luster
Lusting for life

Yet if you hap to perceive her
with keen heart's Eye
through the voracious wildfire
She so madly dances within
Inspired
you can glimpse the anguished
unrest of a sorrow sick spirit
weeping a torrent of torment
crying to be embraced
with unconditional love arms
To be forgiven for sins
self-inflicted by desperate hope
To be saved and counted
amongst the blessed

Such a precious paradoxical posy
interweaving through
my being
Tenderness-Pity-Infatuated Compassion
for this poor fallen angel
consumes sane sensiblity
surrendering
my heartstrings and devotion
upon her aureole

What a seductive spell emanting
from this alluring Aphrodite
Intoxicating impact immutable
Entranced intracelluar
I sweep my beloved into sanctuary
together in flight
upon Venus' wings

En Masse Enrapture

(re)My Salvation
(re)My Scourge
(re)My Sweetest Sin

A Lunacy Loveaffair

[This message has been edited by DrFaustus (11-16-2009 12:24 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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1 posted 2009-11-16 05:36 PM

Enjoyed...James

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2 posted 2009-11-17 09:36 AM

There's so much about this
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1slick_lady
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3 posted 2009-11-17 06:35 PM

welcome to the passion hope to see you again soon

DrFaustus
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since 2009-11-16

Posts 5
Colorado

4 posted 2009-11-17 07:54 PM

I have 2 other poems on here and if I could get some feedback on those too I would be much obliged.
Thank you everyone for your comments thus far.

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