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Open Poetry #45

As Time Changes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-11-16 11:22 AM

As Time Changes
Time changes
As seasons changes
Where life change too
We keep moving on
To the path
Let our souls go
Go out of our hearts
As time changes
Time changes
A heart beats
For every second
As time changes
The world turns
Where love burns
Time changes us
Into life
Into our hearts
Time follows each path
As time goes by
Time follows our dreams
Into reality
Time changes

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-11-16 01:18 PM

hello vandana, this is quite a poetic subject, passing of time and your poem is sweet and intimate. Thanks for sharing

yann

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-11-19 03:08 PM

vandana - many thoughts in this writing, nicely done...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-11-19 05:39 PM

quote:
As time goes by
Time follows our dreams
Into reality

Such a serene perspective, dear Vandana. Nicely done.

Love,
Margherita

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2009-11-19 06:17 PM

Ah time, everybody lives by it and some let it control them, but you have used it wisely and skillfully to write this fine poem...and my time has been well spent..and enjoyable reading it..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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