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nourzihane
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0 posted 2009-11-15 06:07 AM



Hug me and hear me melody of whisperings
Hug me until death
Hug me my eyes loves your seeing
Hug me to sleep lightly and to my eyelids take rest.
Hug me i want to stop my thirst from
spring of your gusher love .
Hug me to forget my sadness and to live
with you the most beautiful dreams
Hug me like baby loves chest of his mother
or like flower loves sunshine.
Hug me...
and play on my heart the most beautiful musical
of love.


Nourzihane

© Copyright 2009 nourzihane - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-11-15 06:17 AM


Dearest Nourzihane, your enchanting words of love are an incredibly intense warm hug themselves, that wraps me in tenderness. The picture represents well the dream of love that lasts forever.

How could he not respond to this beckoning of your heart?

Wonderful.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-11-15 09:47 AM


My dear Nourzihane, to know you is to want to hug you! You have such a tender-hearted, loving soul.

"Hug me like baby loves chest of his mother
or like flower loves sunshine."

~ Absolutely gorgeous!

Sending lots of hugs your way,



With love,
Your Friend
Linda

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-11-15 01:53 PM


enjoyed it, a lot of emotions.

yann

Poetal
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4 posted 2009-11-15 02:35 PM


Feelings jump off the page as you share tender love. Hugs can be heart warming and a healing!
Thanks for the nice read.

AL

AL Inmon

suthern
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5 posted 2009-11-15 03:59 PM


How very beautiful... reading this feels like a word hug!
nourzihane
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6 posted 2009-11-17 03:49 AM


Margherita...Linda

spicial thanks to you my dear friends
Your presence such as the panacea
Your encouragement gives me hope to continue write poems.
pls stay with me.

love
Nourzihane

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-11-17 03:55 AM


You are most welcome, dear poetess! It would be my supreme pleasure to "stay" with you! Your poems touch my heart.


Linda

nourzihane
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8 posted 2009-11-17 04:01 AM


2islandes2...poetal

thank you for your humble pass
Please accept my appreciation and respect

My greetings
Nourzihane

nourzihane
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9 posted 2009-11-17 04:28 AM


Dear friend... suthem...

Maybe i can't express in same langauge but i offer you a flower to say thank you for your scent pass.


Love
Nourzihane

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2009-11-17 07:16 AM


"Hug me...
and play on my heart the most beautiful musical of love."

beautifully expressed


M

nourzihane
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11 posted 2009-11-17 10:56 AM


Dear nakdthoughts

And beautiful pass

Thank you
Nourzihane

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2009-11-17 09:19 PM


Nice...James
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2009-11-19 03:06 PM


nourzihane - a huglet is on the way...

BC

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2009-11-19 06:33 PM


Very loving and beautiful poem, such devotion and kindness, enjoyed reading this....

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

nourzihane
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15 posted 2009-11-20 04:18 AM


James.. Charle Bill..Goldenrose

Beautiful presence thank you my dear friends

My greetings
Nourzihane


Klassy Lassy
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16 posted 2009-11-20 03:03 PM


Somehow, in these lines of heart, the art of purity unfolds it's arms and I am wrapped in a permeating glow to smile me from the inside out!     I love it when hugs happen simply for the joy of joy!

Please do continue to write.  Loved this!

nourzihane
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17 posted 2009-11-21 02:43 PM


Dear klassy

i like this humble pass from you
thank you acept my greetings

love
Nourzihane

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2009-11-24 06:19 PM


Revisit...a pleasure to read again...James
nourzihane
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19 posted 2009-11-30 03:40 AM


My dear friend... james...

it's nice to read again this honour for me
your presence such as musk (perfume)
thank you so much

My respect
Nourzihane

Earl Brinkman
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20 posted 2010-03-20 07:53 AM


I love the line `Hug me like baby loves chest of his mother`.  I think you deserve a hug for this poem.
Sunshine
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21 posted 2010-03-20 12:02 PM


or like flower loves sunshine.
Hug me...

~*~

Beautifully said, Nourzihane. It is good
to read you again.






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