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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-11-13 06:33 PM




fate fate
an online match gate?
wait wait

in all these years
all the fears
oh the tears

24 hours ago
written one off
my 5 month pursuit
the girl I've known
been friends with
24 hours ago
I had moved on

moved on

agreed to meet
meet another woman
a computer online reach
a site, a sight

to behold

wrote her an email
agreed to her invite to meet
went to look back
and that profile is gone

now today

today today
24 hours have passed away
clicked on today's daily match
my 5 month pursuit, in today's daily catch

24 hours before

written her off
to find her as my match
for the day, question asked
interested?

interested?

me? sure
the same as 5 months before
never never
seen this before
a match in my window flew
someone I knew, who knew

interested?

interested?
me? sure
I text, I typed
now wait, wait
what else can I do?

the lady at the g8
and me, martiniat8

f8?

today today
just the same as before
wait just wait
w8

see what fate

has in store



[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (11-13-2009 09:09 PM).]

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Mas814
Junior Member
since 2009-11-13
Posts 15
NY (not nyc)
1 posted 2009-11-13 06:59 PM


that is a very creatinve approach to describing online dating.
martiniat8
Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-11-13 07:48 PM


its not creative at all. well maybe in expresion.

it's what happened, the girl I met and have been friends with for 5 months, suddenly shows up, in my matches 24 hours after I had decided to move on from her

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-11-14 12:29 PM


Sounds like kismet to me! Life is full of surprises and 'koinky dinks' (coincidences). Or perhaps it's a case of synchroniciy! Good luck, martini! Cheers!


Linda

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