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Poetal
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0 posted 2009-11-13 03:06 PM


"my yellow rose"

i think that i shall never see
a flower as lovely as thee
to your beautiful skin it could never compare
nor to the fragrance of your fresh auburn hair
as the heavenly skys above have stars
that shine oh so magnificently bright
only through my yellow rose's bright blue beyes
can i see their shining radiant light
as the western winds blow her soft silky hair
to that special sight truly nothing can compare
i write this heartfelt poem to make myself very clear
i love you now and forever my loving precious dear

AL Inmon

© Copyright 2009 AL Inmon - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
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1 posted 2009-11-13 08:29 PM



A very poignant touching poem Al and

romantic as well, much enjoyed. Take care.

Lindsay

Lamar Cole
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2 posted 2009-11-13 09:03 PM


Very nice.
Poetal
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3 posted 2009-11-14 11:12 AM


Lamar
Thanks for your time to review.

AL

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4 posted 2009-11-15 05:14 PM


Hello my friend...Such a rose was my mother
and wife's favorite....Me, the thorns get me
every time.....good to see you.........

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5 posted 2009-11-16 05:36 AM


sweet~~

M

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6 posted 2009-11-16 09:09 AM


this is for such beauty and sentiments that poetry can exist too, thanks for the puren (french sense) poem.

regards

yann

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7 posted 2009-11-16 09:59 AM


Great tribute, Al, to someone who is obviously a great lady.  Your love has never lost that adolescent fervour.  Good read.
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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