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Balladeer
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0 posted 2009-11-11 07:44 AM




I try to repost this every Veteran's Day in rememberance. It's not necessary for those of you who have seen it over the years to respond. You
have responded many times and I am grateful for every one. It's just my tradition...
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The soldier boy was sitting calmly underneath that tree.
As I approached it, I could see him beckoning to me.
The battle had been long and hard and lasted through the night
And scores of figures on the ground lay still by morning's light

"I wonder if you'd help me, sir", he smiled as best he could."
A sip of water on this morn would surely do me good.
We fought all day and fought all night with scarcely any rest -
A sip of water for I have a small pain in my chest."

As I looked at him, I could see the large stain on his shirt
All reddish-brown from his warm blood mixed in with Asian dirt.
"Not much", said he. "I count myself more lucky than the rest.
They're all gone while I just have a small pain in my chest."

"Must be fatigue", he weakIy smiled. "I must be getting old.
I see the sun is shining bright and yet I'm feeling cold.
We climbed the hill, two hundred strong, but as we cleared the crest,
The night exploded and I felt this small pain in my chest."

"I looked around to get some aid - the only things I found
Were big, deep craters in the earth - bodies on the ground.
I kept an firing at them, sir. I tried to do my best,
But finally sat down with this small pain in my chest."

"I'm grateful, sir", he whispered, as I handed my canteen
And smiled a smile that was, I think, the brightest that I've seen.
"Seems silly that a man my size so full of vim and zest,
Could find himself defeated by a small pain in his chest."

"What would my wife be thinking of her man so strong and grown,
If she could see me sitting here, too weak to stand alone?
Could my mother have imagined, as she held me to her breast,
That I'd be sitting HERE one day with this pain in my chest?"

"Can it be getting dark so soon?" He winced up at the sun.
"It's growing dim and I thought that the day had just begun.
I think, before I travel on, I'll get a little rest ..........
And, quietly, the boy died from that small pain in his chest

I don't recall what happened then. I think I must have cried;
I put my arms around him and I pulled him to my side
And, as I held him to me, I could feel our wounds were pressed
The large one in my heart against the small one in his chest.
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suthern
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1 posted 2009-11-11 07:49 AM


When I stop responding to this one, you'll know the beat in my own chest has stilled. This isn't just one of your best, Mike... it's one of THE best poems ever penned and I thank you for sharing it with us again.

Oh... and Mike... my heartfelt thanks to you and all our veterans.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2009-11-11 08:18 AM


Traditions are good. Memories can be wonderfully painful. It's sometimes the only way we know we step from day to day. Thank you for the annual repost.
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3 posted 2009-11-11 01:12 PM


I too have a small pain in my chest.

    

I agree with Suthern 100% the day I quit reading and waiting for this poem to honor our military,
is the day too that my heart will have stopped.  
Thank you for this honor to them Michael.

sewasham
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4 posted 2009-11-11 03:58 PM


Still one of my favorites. Thanks. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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5 posted 2009-11-11 05:02 PM


BRAVO !!

The very best!

"Thank you", for this wonderful poem.
PFC US Army.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2009-11-11 05:08 PM


I agree, it is one of the best!

M

Christopher
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7 posted 2009-11-11 10:04 PM


I don't make it here often -- time and life, etc -- but I knew that I would find this if I came today.

Mike, I say it every year, and every year it is full of truth -- this piece touches me as so few ever have. Your words and heart are greatly appreciated. I can't read this without getting a small pain in my chest. Thank you, again, for this.

C

sandgrain
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8 posted 2009-11-11 10:53 PM


So touching, yet so typical of the bravery so many have and are putting forth for all of us.  I do hope this continues for each Veteran's Day forever.

Thank you, sir.

God bless,
Rae

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9 posted 2009-11-12 12:56 PM


And you know I would be here.This was once posted on the wall of respect for our soldiers over seas a few years ago.It is indeed a shame those boys are still there.But we are for them and this poem will go forward again. thank ou  latearrival
jwesley
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10 posted 2009-11-12 02:46 AM


I remember....thanks for doing your duty again, my friend...


j.

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2009-11-12 06:44 AM


It is a wonderful tradition ...

It is a wonderful poem ...

It is a wonderful reminder to all ...

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Margherita
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12 posted 2009-11-12 01:42 PM


I bow to you for this excellent, deeply poignant write, that tugs at my heartstrings and brought tears. Why, oh, why can't we stop this craziness?

I hope this poem is published. While it stirs compassion and honors those who have died it is also an invitation to ponder on the human ability to avoid these wars in the future.

Love and peace.
Margherita

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13 posted 2009-11-12 02:48 PM


What an emotional read!!! What an impressive piece of writing!
Mike, please keep on posting this poem each and every year! We who have previously read it, want to read it again and again! ~ and those who are new to pip, should have the privilege of reading it for their first time ~ which surely won't be their last.

Love, Harmony, and World Peace,

Linda

P.S. You look mighty good in red, white, and blue!

Balladeer
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14 posted 2009-11-12 04:14 PM


Thank you all for your comments and support. Christopher, always special when you drop in. I appreciate all of the kind words.

Margherita, actually the poem is in the high school literature textbook and is required reading for all students....in China! There are about  6 billion Chinese kids who know me, at least! Thank you,  my friend.

LindsayP
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15 posted 2009-11-12 08:19 PM



Thanks Mike for putting that great poem in again, it really was a delight to read. It

must make you proud to repost it. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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16 posted 2009-11-13 02:43 AM


This is very moving and is a fine tribute to soldiers every where.  Thank you for sharing, Balladeer.  I will look for it next year.

Alison

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17 posted 2009-11-13 11:02 AM


We are all sad by the loss we have from wars and I for one look forward to the time God promises to end all wars. Thanks for the read.
AL

AL Inmon

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18 posted 2009-11-14 01:50 AM


Thank you for continuing this wonderful tradition. This is my favorite of all of your poems and was one of the reasons I started posting in the blue pages
And I cry every time

LIz

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19 posted 2009-11-14 10:04 PM


Thanks again, Mike.
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