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Open Poetry #45

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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2009-11-11 02:41 AM

Caught in the confines
of this rusty cage
This room that defines
My listless rage
Smelling the Embers
of this place where I burn
tragically dying
As I'm waiting my turn
To feel all these Fires
That crackle with pain
left here in shackles
No longer with name
But numbered to pass
In the shadows of shame
unknown and beknownst
My cries without word
disappearing and lost
No longer absurd
But a figment
of your imagination

Poetal
Member

since 2009-11-09

Posts 74
Texas, United States

1 posted 2009-11-11 05:41 PM

A good job here and written with great poetic form with excellent rhythm and rhyme. Thanks kindly for the fun read.

AL Inmon

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