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Poetal
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0 posted 2009-11-11 12:33 PM



What does it mean to be a friend?
Perhaps it means, you are willing to bend.
Willing to bend like a tree in the wind.
To bend over backwards to please a friend.
Does it mean you are willing to lend,
A few dollars to someone not your kin?
To some that might set a bad trend,
For someone to make a loan to a friend.
'Tis a little kindness is what you intend,
You must be prepared sometimes to bend.
Thus showing true love to any old friend,
In my books I'd say you will always win!

AL Inmon

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-11-11 01:22 PM


Poetal - a friend in need would be grateful for help if needed. Nice write...

BC

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2 posted 2009-11-11 04:14 PM


Very clever, Poetal.
               Ida

LindsayP
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3 posted 2009-11-11 08:28 PM



Thus showing true love to any old friend,
In my books I'd say you will always win!


A great write AL and so very true.

As you sow, so shall you reap.

Lindsay

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-11-12 07:02 AM


Yes, your words on friendship display truth. It is in giving that we receive.

Well done!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-11-12 09:32 AM


Hello Poetal, the real happiness is to give, your poem means a lot.

best wishes

yann

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6 posted 2009-11-14 09:22 PM


I like this very much!
Osprey
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7 posted 2009-11-14 09:29 PM


Think back; you may not have realised at the time, but you do now. That is a true friend.
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8 posted 2009-11-15 03:35 PM


I like this too.

A

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9 posted 2009-11-16 05:38 AM


I think  bending and giving for a friend is what a friend does, not sure about bending  over backwards~~~

M

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