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Poetal
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since 2009-11-09
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Texas, United States

0 posted 2009-11-09 06:29 PM



contradiction is a word well said
that popped right out , of my head

though I am aware , of what it means
it fits right in , with all men=s dreams

things that come to us , when asleep
like one counting , all those sheep

think you=re fishing , at the lake
found you left home , without bait

or when we fall , clear to the ground
you get back up and look all around

no one there , to it see that bad fall
wake up find , was a dream after all


AL Inmon

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-11-10 11:46 AM


I love the general idea of the poem, deep and beautifully shared.

best wishes

yann

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2009-11-10 09:28 PM



Enjoyed your post Poetal but it always makes me wonder what makes us dream the crazy dreams that we do. Sometimes I dream

of things that I have never even thought of in my waking moments and it does make you wonder. All the best over there my friend.
Take care.

Lindsay

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