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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2009-11-07 06:01 AM



Our love is written in the stars.
Illuminating the universe from Mercury to Mars.
Our love is floating in the sky.
Dancing above the clouds so high.

Our love is sung by the wind.
Echoed by the thunder.
Caressed by the rain
A thing of beauty and wonder.

Our love is touched by the sun.
Blessed by God.
Etched in the heart.
Destined to last forever from the start.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-11-07 10:40 AM


love your second verse especially

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-11-08 06:27 AM


"A thing of beauty and wonder"!

Yes, indeed!

You sing of your love with the accompaniment of the music that you find within your heart.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

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