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Hey, June
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Hey, June |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Forgive me, June, Did I hurt you? Did the leisure of past Forget that a romance Begins with a stare And continues with a kiss. Forgive me, June, Have the silent mornings given way to the drafts of wind until I step outside the door? Is a romance ours, is it lust, love between two 'souls' defying a mirage of heartbreak, or am I destined for a perilous white background With only a couch to sit on? Maybe we could go back to the first night we met Forget December and meet again, In June. |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Very nice work here, Tomer. I love the circular concept, where the first lines reconnect with the final lines to bring closure. Great read. Namaste Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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