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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2009-11-05 07:03 AM






difference makers
risk takers
fathers of the beat
with
cigar box guitars
smiling hands
and
dirty feet

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TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2009-11-05 07:05 AM


If one of the admins read this, can I get my pic removed?
SlowlyFallAway
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2 posted 2009-11-05 09:45 AM


smiling hands!! i like that alot
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2009-11-05 09:59 AM


This poem, Tina, is a wonderful.  I really love it and the picture.

xoxoxo
A

PS - When I had my picture removed, I believe I emailed Ron.

Back again - no I went to the Tech Talk forum and posted the question under the Geek something board.

Again, love the poem.

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-11-09 02:42 AM


Love your writing, Tina.
                    Ida

Kosmic888
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since 2009-11-01
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Vancouver Canada
5 posted 2009-11-09 06:07 PM


God this is an awesome piece! You've managed to describe my life in one perfectly written stanza - I'm a fan - Peace - Ron
Poetal
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since 2009-11-09
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Texas, United States
6 posted 2009-11-09 06:32 PM


Just to add to the dirty feet that would be a refreshing treat! I love music and down home country and blue grass I truly love. Thanks for the thought inspiring write.
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