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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2009-11-05 05:23 AM








Like scattered leaves...my words will flow


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-11-05 08:13 AM


Beautiful, dear Titia, and I agree with your words. Had some difficulty in reading them, the color is a tiny bit too dark, maybe you can lighten it a bit.
Dear Marge is missed so much, but our connection will continue to warm our hearts.

Love,
Margherita

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-11-05 03:23 PM


Perfect!


latearrival
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3 posted 2009-11-05 04:02 PM


Beautiful Titia.  A great friend you are to continue to keep Marge in our hearts and minds.

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Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2009-11-06 02:04 PM


Titia, this is just beautiful. Thank you for this. I truly miss, Marge.
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5 posted 2009-11-06 03:51 PM


A beautiful tribute, Titia.
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2009-11-06 06:25 PM


Thanks, I know she's smiling up there and you know what amazes me? Ever since last week it's pouring rain overhere, clouded sky and then, when the moon was full, there was one night she showed herself. I like to think Marge pulled the curtains aside, so I could take a picture.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Tracie
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7 posted 2009-11-07 04:33 PM


Titia,
  Thank you! What a beautiful and heart-breaking poem. I read this the other night and was so overwhelmed with emotion that I was unable to comment. It is not easy taking pictures of the moon, but somehow you do it beautifully. I was going to tell you I especially the like the first stanza of your poem, but they I realized I especially like the last stanza, and the middle one too. Ha  Thank you for your tribute to my mom. And thank all of you for your nice words. You have no idea how much you have all helped me this past year. Love, Tracie

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8 posted 2009-11-08 06:24 PM


I can't see a full moon without thinking of Marge... and telling her hello. *S* What a legacy of love she left!!

Beautiful work, Titia!

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9 posted 2009-11-10 04:24 PM


Brilliant! I love how you're keeping Marge's memory alive by posting poems about the moon! Yes, she is watching over us every minute here at Pip and her Grandies


ARCTIC WIND

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10 posted 2009-11-18 08:29 PM


Of course she pulled the curtains aside, she did it here too...that's so like her.  

A lovely poem, Titia!  

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