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howardtsu
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0 posted 2009-11-04 04:47 PM


                                
howard :

                    could you hand me that Q-Tip?

q-tip :

                    sure

                          [hands it to Howard]

howard :

                    here Eve

eve :

                     thanks Howard

                     by the way

                     i’ve been trying to learn to play pool

                     do you have any cue tips?

howard :

                     sure

                                 [earlier that day]

q-tip :

                     now remember Howard

                     she’ll give you a sign

                     just remember my cue tips






                                                                                               love,

                                                                                               eve & howard






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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-11-04 05:48 PM


Very clever little piece.  Nice crafting.
Thank you.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-11-05 08:58 AM


So cute, as all of your work, dear Howard!

Love,
Margherita

howardtsu
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3 posted 2009-11-05 06:27 PM


thanks margherita  

thanks ancienthippie  

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