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howardtsu
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0 posted 2009-11-04 04:44 PM



eve :

                       it surprises me

                       the way he prizes me

                       it's as if his Publisher's Clearing House prize is me

friend :

                      i know what you mean Eve

                      my boyfriend

                      the way he sizes me

                      you’d think the only thing he sees in his eyes is me

eve :

                                                         exactly






                                                                                                                    love,

                                                                                                                     eve & howard





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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-11-04 05:51 PM


I am sensing in your work the arrival of a new style of poetry:  cool, current, and easy to text.  Good work, Howard (and Eve, too, of course).
Namaste
Jim, the AncientHippie

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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2 posted 2009-11-05 09:56 AM


this is so unique. i love your stuff
howardtsu
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3 posted 2009-11-05 06:33 PM


thanks guys  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-11-09 05:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kosmic888
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Vancouver Canada
5 posted 2009-11-09 06:02 PM


this is brilliant, love it!!! There are degrees of Eve in all of us, that's for sure... thx for the reminder - Peace Ron
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