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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow

0 posted 2009-11-04 09:05 AM





All things must end,
but is the ending
an absolute?
Is not that end
a shining doorway
that opens to a new beginning?
Does the phoenix not spring,
singing,
from its ashes
into a different sky?

Nataraj dances
while the cosmic wheel turns:
endings and beginnings
are defined
by point of view.

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

© Copyright 2009 James D. Fanning - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2009-11-04 09:58 AM


The balance of both, keen to the eye of the beholder.  This is happiness in full regalia.

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2009-11-04 10:23 AM


'into a different sky' -just so.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2009-11-04 12:54 PM


an ending is a beginning and a beginn ing is an ending, thanks for the thoughtful poem.

yann

AncientHippie
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4 posted 2009-11-04 05:54 PM


Yann, Nan, and ThisDiamond:  Thank you for your kind comments.  You are a pleasure to write for.
Go well, and in
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

SlowlyFallAway
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5 posted 2009-11-05 09:59 AM


"endings and beginnings are defined by point of view"

nice was to sum it all up

kindredspirit
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6 posted 2009-11-05 11:41 AM


Time is shaped like a circle.
You portrayed this well.

Margherita
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7 posted 2009-11-05 03:42 PM


"Soul Fugue" wonderful title for a deeply insightful poem, dear Jim.

Love,
Margherita

Namyh
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8 posted 2009-11-05 05:32 PM


Ancient Hippie - It's that fear we all harbor when exiting one ending and embarking thru that door into a new beginning. I guess that's the music we must face to progress. I like this AH. Namyh
AncientHippie
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9 posted 2009-11-06 10:09 AM


Slowly, Kindred, Margherita, and Namyh:  Thank you all for your comments.  I am so glad that this has resonated with you all.
Very kindest regards,
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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