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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2009-11-01 08:25 PM



The clarinet's sad soulful wail
Fills silence and destroys the gale
Of winds so soft they're barely heard
With sound so strong it's past all word

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

© Copyright 2009 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-11-01 08:47 PM


I can hear the music, Rachael.  This is wonderful.  You are doing so good.

xoxoxo
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2 posted 2009-11-02 09:48 AM


I really like this and would like to show it to my niece... her clarinet is helping her go to college! (band scholarship)
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Very mellow, Rachael.  The woodwinds are magical.  Nice snapshot.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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4 posted 2009-11-02 12:56 PM


Thanks,Z!

You're more than welcome to, suthern.

I am glad you enjoyed it, AH.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

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