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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2009-11-01 11:49 AM



(Samhain is pronounced "SOW-en")

Samhain,
in days gone by
enough to turn the chilling eye
to any thoughts of peace and safety
for the Christian soul,
now it's but a day of play
as children make their way through parented streets
in wardrobes purchased from a costume man,
with horror reduced to caricatures
of fears that loosed the bladders of our forebears.


©2009 by icebox
  



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Kosmic888
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1 posted 2009-11-01 12:20 PM


this is a chilling piece, but it really addresses the 'dark' times we live in, unfortunately. Strong imagery here,and the pacing is wonderful...   Kosmic888

'we are all connected by strings of light'

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-11-01 03:55 PM


I hope your Samhain was a good one. Even WITH the beastly little creatures in their costumes. Blessed be.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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3 posted 2009-11-02 04:03 AM


Yes, I agree, nothing remains as it was. Samhain in its celtic origins was certainly a totally different matter.
You caught this as always masterfully, dear Charlie.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-11-02 01:07 PM


Maybe someday we can change all the horrors of the world into something different instead of just exchanging one for another.
                                   Ida

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