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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-11-01 08:57 AM



The power of the poetry is limited
by the indented color of your dresses.

As a dog attached to a chain
the will cannot abandon your kisses.

The distant banks are reached
only by the thought of returning at your bosoms.

The exhilaration of the singing is foreign to me
if my voice hasn’t the intransigence of your eyes.

The ground shies away under the words
when my house escapes the heart architect.

The desire to please is sometimes saddened
by the melancholy of your hair.

You are my muse and I cannot imagine to write
without knowing the glance which you put on me.

The power of the poetry is limited
by the indented color of your dresses.

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1 posted 2009-11-01 01:16 PM


I sure wish I was there in your view.  Loved this one.
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-11-02 04:12 AM


Mon cher Yann, c'est extraordinaire ce que tu as créé ici!

Tu est vraiment profondément inspiré. Je crois que je vais le lire encore plusieurs fois!

Bisous
Margherita

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3 posted 2009-11-03 02:22 AM


I wish I could reply in French.  But, I do love how you put words together and create such images.

xooxox
Alison

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-11-03 04:19 AM


thanks mysteria for the kind comment.

yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-11-03 04:20 AM


merci beaucoup margherita pour tes commentaires toujours passionnants et amicaux, tu dis beaucoup de belles choses.


yann

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6 posted 2009-11-03 04:21 AM


Thanks Alison for the kind words.

gros bisous de france

yann

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-11-03 05:54 PM


"The power of the poetry is limited"

~ Not when the poetry is written by a certain Fresch poet!

Saved to my folder about poets and poetry ~ and muses!  

An a-MUSING write!

Love & Poet Light,

Linda

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8 posted 2009-11-03 06:16 PM


Hello Yann:  What an intimate look at your Muse.  May you both walk in poetic light.
Lovely read.
Namaste
Jim

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