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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2009-10-30 11:23 AM



Don’t go changin’ on me baby
I don’t care if you think
I’m telling’ you what to do or
A different man to try to be
Because
Who you’ve shown me
That you are
I need you to be
Just

Don’t go changin’ on me baby
I don’t care what you think
I’m saying or askin’ for
I’m not askin’ for anything new
Or something more
Don’t want to find out
Too late
You were just
Holding back for me
Saving
The hard ride
For when you know
I won’t let go
Just

Don’t go changin’ on me baby
I don’t care who you used to be
That’s not who you’ve been to me
I don’t want to find out
There ain’t anything
I can do
But
Shut up and ride
While
Watchin’ myself
Slowly die
Inside


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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2009-10-30 12:36 PM


ms lg..daaaymmn I bet you would do just fine on your own scoot right now...enjoyed the tude ms
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2009-10-30 12:45 PM


D-that's a bet you'd lose, you've never seen me on a bycycle! LOL~L
Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
3 posted 2009-11-02 12:29 PM


Sounds like some painful control issues.  Whose?  Interesting write.  Made me think.

Shenachie

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