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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow

0 posted 2009-10-30 09:28 AM




It wasn't a magical star
granting a childish wish
     that made me grown up,
nor was it an evil wizard's
vengeful spell
     that made me old.

She looked at me,
secure there on my lap,
     Pooh flannel 'jammies'
wrapping her in the security
of being young, and safe
     In Daddy's arms.

I used to fly with Wendy and the boys,
run from pirates with young Jim Hawkins,
     that was the boy I was!
It seems only a few minutes ago
Gordon and I fought the Dervishes
     at far-away Khartoum.

It wasn't cosmic stardust,
falling one mystic night,
     that wrought this change
from the carefree boy I was,
the discovering, exploring, querying
     consumer of countless books.

It was the knowledge, my child,
the sure and wondrous certainty
     that you awaited,
with your brother and sisters,
that made me run, singing,
     to be here with you today.
      

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-10-30 11:51 AM


Wow, dear Jim, this tugs at my heartstrings more than I can tell.

So very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-10-30 12:37 PM


AH..some tender and tie-dyed...enjoyed your ink here
AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
3 posted 2009-10-31 08:09 AM


DS and Margherita:  Many thanks.  This piece is dear to my heart.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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