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Lamar Cole
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0 posted 2009-10-30 02:37 AM


The wind blows free across the sea.
A little girl laughs gaily on her father's knee.
A bird sings happily in a tree.
Love blows free for my love and me.

Deer run free in the field.
Eagles fly free at will.
Leaves dance freely in the wind.
I will love you freely until life's end.

[This message has been edited by Lamar Cole (10-30-2009 08:20 AM).]

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AncientHippie
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1 posted 2009-10-30 08:03 AM


Crisp and light piece, Lamar.  Buoyant and full of spirit.  Thank you.

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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2 posted 2009-10-30 02:46 PM


Just delightful - wish I had been that little girl.
MorningStar
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3 posted 2009-10-31 08:58 PM


Wow, this is so incredibly precious!  Short and sweet - felt it on the heartstrings.

If I don't say it...who will?

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