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MorningStar
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0 posted 10-29-2009 07:12 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MorningStar


Show me yours
And I'll show you mine
Fateful words indeed

Who'd have guessed
Such a simple request
to become a life long creed

Tempted and enticed they were
by his piercing baby blues

His sultry smiles
tempt and beguile
Even those he didn't choose

Cuddled and sequestered in
dark and secret halls

Spin the bottle
to kiss and coddle
Says the line that starts it all

Show me yours
and I'll show you mine


If I don't say it...who will?

[This message has been edited by MorningStar (10-29-2009 11:34 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 10-29-2009 07:41 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

That was fun! What a great read! thanks!~L
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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2 posted 10-29-2009 09:55 PM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

Promise? :P Loved It!

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

MorningStar
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3 posted 10-29-2009 11:21 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

L - Wow, thanks!!  I'm glad you liked it.  I totally don't do rhyming - so I just thought...what the heck!

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MorningStar
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4 posted 10-29-2009 11:23 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

s1nfully - But of course!!  But like so advertised...you first!

Aenea

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tommy738
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5 posted 10-31-2009 03:58 PM       View Profile for tommy738   Email tommy738   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tommy738

fun read i really liked it
Osprey
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6 posted 10-31-2009 04:30 PM       View Profile for Osprey   Email Osprey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Osprey

I'm just an old cynic, but this reads very dark to me. Very dark
MorningStar
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7 posted 10-31-2009 05:13 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

Tommy738 - Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you enjoyed

Osprey - never fear, no dark undertone here.  This was written after a talk w/ a friend whose life long quest is romantic tête-à-têtes.  His creed:  "Lips come in every flavor - and I must sample them all in order to be a true connoisseur".  

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Bill Charles
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8 posted 10-31-2009 06:27 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

MorningStar - here's blue piercing at you...

BC
TriumphGirl
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9 posted 10-31-2009 06:57 PM       View Profile for TriumphGirl   Email TriumphGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TriumphGirl

This made me smile and remember high school.
Very nice!


"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" ~ Plato

MorningStar
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10 posted 10-31-2009 07:26 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

BC - Wink.  Wink.  ;0)

TriumpGirl - Thanks for reading!  I'm glad to have brought a little joy your way.

Aenea

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MorningStar
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11 posted 04-20-2011 10:43 AM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

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