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Martie
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0 posted 2009-10-28 04:29 PM


Darling daughter of my heart
Open is the cage that had me locked
Notice how my freedom is your door
Ever in my heart needs nothing more

© Copyright 2009 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-10-28 04:43 PM


Oh, dear Martie, what a beautiful poignant poem dedicated to your daughter.

Love knows no barriers.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-10-28 05:06 PM


All blessings Marti.  This touched me too.
Thank you

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2009-10-28 07:47 PM


Yes, happy birthday, Michelle,

and, though your poem is short, so you know, it speaks volumes to my heart about how unfettered a Mother's and Daughter's love for each other truly is.

Thank you for sharing and God bless,

-Bob


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4 posted 2009-10-28 08:12 PM


I thank you for sharing your darling daughter with us for all these years.

She graces these pages every time you do, and we are blessed by the love you share.

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5 posted 2009-10-31 02:29 AM


You stayed on my mind all day when I read this.  You write such love with such simplicity - and I still think of you.

A

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6 posted 2009-10-31 07:52 AM


"Ever in my heart needs nothing more "

no truer words could ever be written, Martie

:hugs"
M

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