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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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With heart and tongue tied I made this bed with loving hands Placing each pillow Lighting candles to soften the darkness Crushing rose petals between my palms Scenting the air with my desire An offering to you My bed my desire my heart All yours for the taking If I don't say it...who will? [This message has been edited by MorningStar (10-28-2009 03:13 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very elegant ritual you have offered us here. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thank you so much Margherita! Only true love could get me to make my bed in the first place...teehee I'm glad you enjoyed it. If I don't say it...who will? |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This is beautifully seductive. Thanks for sharing! Shenachie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sensual and beautiful! *S* |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very nice. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Lucky him or her.  I liked this loads. It's concise and sensual, but real tasteful-like, and all that. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Scenting the air with my desire" a great line  M |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Can't go wrong with candles. Just make sure nothing catches fire. Keep one eye open. Or at least your mind. I like this. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Shenachie, Suthern, & Lamar - I do thank you for stoppin by!!! I'm glad you enjoyed. Paul - For you a wink, a smile and a "why thank you, kind sir"! ;0) Slowly - truer word were never spoken, my friend! I once caught my Gram's wig on fire in a little incident my family likes to call the "Candle Gate Scandal"... Yeah, not pretty If I don't say it...who will? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice writing, Morning Star. Ida |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Candle Gate Scandal? :O paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Oh yes, Candle Gate. It had all the makings of an epic event - tears, recriminations, wigs. It was brutal. Brutal I tell you! Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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