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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2009-10-27 10:24 PM


I put lipstick on today, along with eye make up and foundation. Anyway. I kissed a piece of paper, and wrote this short poem on it.


A Lipstick Smudge

A kiss of true love
A gift from above
For my one true love
Is more than just
A lipstick smudge

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

© Copyright 2009 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2009-10-27 10:33 PM


It's the thought that counts, and this is just as sweet as can be..
but yea,  love is more than that, then again isn't it love that's behind the idea!!  

Nice~

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-10-27 10:40 PM


Thanks, Blues. And you're absolutely right. It is love that is the idea behind it.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-10-28 09:11 AM


hello Rachael, this is cute and lovely, I loved the lipstick smudge.

regards

yann

Namyh
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4 posted 2009-10-28 05:03 PM


Rachael - It does a heart good to know it's more than a lipstick smudge. But it can relish a lipstick smack anytime. I like this Rachael. It's poignant. Namyh
Margherita
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5 posted 2009-10-28 05:08 PM


Very romantic and so true.

Love,
Margherita

tommy738
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6 posted 2009-10-28 08:54 PM


What I wouldnt give to wake up to something so simple yet so touching. Things like that would make this grown man tear at its sight
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-10-29 06:57 PM


Enjoyed...James
rachaelfuchsberger
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8 posted 2009-10-31 03:30 PM


Thank you all very much. My girlfriend, Tonia, loved it, but called me a goofball at the same time. But I'm HER goofball, and that's what counts.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

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