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naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England

0 posted 2009-10-27 09:01 PM



thought it was time for a bit of fun, try this in a mockney/west indies accent


there i was just standing
quietly my own business minding
when your incisive iliteration
broke into my concentration
you asked what i was drinking
and i had some trouble thinking
but my mind then became clear
and i asked you for one more beer
with much generous libation
you enabled my emancipation
much much later i sort of knew
that we would eventually become two
so what's the morale of this story
daydreaming can bring much glory



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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-10-27 09:27 PM


There you go!!

How fun, neat poem, naturegirl~

naturegirl
Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England
2 posted 2009-10-28 08:30 AM


thank you, i needed a to do something a bit lighter & less introspective & it certainly did the trick. thanks again.


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2009-11-16 06:35 AM


I think I need to do something a bit lighter too...

thinking,

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2009-11-17 09:16 PM


I like this nonsense...James
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