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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-10-26 06:07 PM




I will wrap you in thoroughly thought through
patterned quilts that spell I love you
in delicately flowered squares

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
AncientHippie
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1 posted 2009-10-26 06:08 PM


Nice work, VM.  Succinct and sweet.  Beautiful sentiment.  Thanks,
Jim

Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment:  The Complete Sutras

viking_metal
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2 posted 2009-10-26 06:32 PM


Thanks very much.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2009-10-26 09:54 PM


Warm thoughts
viking_metal
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4 posted 2009-10-26 10:11 PM


fanksh.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

MorningStar
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5 posted 2009-10-26 10:23 PM


Ooh, this is really beautiful and warm.  It made me sigh.  Out loud, even.  Which of course made the other two people in the room curious.  P.S.  they love it too!
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6 posted 2009-10-27 12:48 PM


Wrap away.  You already have me cozy in the emotion of this piece.

Good work, Paul.  I am a fan!

Ali-Yup

viking_metal
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7 posted 2009-10-27 07:44 AM


Morning Star, thanks so very much. I am glad you and your friends/folks enjoyed it.


Alaboohum, I am lucky to have a dedicated fan such as yourself.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-10-27 08:21 PM


Such tenderness is woven into this warm quilt-message, dear Paul! Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2009-10-27 10:34 PM


Wow, who knew!!!
Love this little glimpse of your heart, metal man~

viking_metal
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10 posted 2009-10-27 10:57 PM


Thanks Margopargo, always good to hear from you. I am happy you liked it.

Blues, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I let the sun shine in every so often.


This is being received better than I thought it would be, I wish "A Love Note" had gotten this much feedback! (HINT. harhar.)

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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