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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-10-26 12:02 PM

perhaps of the tan santana
some kind of long legged music
and a dancer's eyes that glance

then are back to butterflies again
as she wonders of the bentley metals
how they would adorn her wrist

and would they arrive with her smile
like additional diamonds below her gaze
when there are the cluttering of eyes

at the brim of her coffee color mornings
and she is some lady edge of dawn
that steps to curb side conclusions

where only whispers know her music

_______________

daark (do of metal)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2009-10-26 12:34 PM

...where only whispers know her music... I love that~L

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-10-26 12:51 PM

ms lg...thanks lady for the eyes..

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

3 posted 2009-10-26 04:05 PM

I'm not sure if I liked the car or the poem better. Both are works of art.

Arana Darkwolf

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-10-26 06:16 PM

Ms berger..thanks lady.

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

5 posted 2009-10-26 06:21 PM

"..at the brim of her coffee colored mornings.." indeed, DS. And who, oh who, would/could dare to customise a Bentley?
Cheers

Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning.
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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-10-26 06:47 PM

and she is some lady edge of dawn...
...
where only whispers know her music

~*~

I love dawn

I love whispers

and I think I'm the only one
that could possibly love my edges.

You make metal melt comfortably around
shoulders of the uneasy, DS.

I've been on a DS diet too long. Time
to indulge.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-10-27 07:25 AM

AH...thanks my friend..they did do a wicked job on her though..the Bentley..

___________

ms sun, love your edges? ummmm will be right over babe,. Thanks for the read and comment.

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