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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2009-10-24 04:22 PM




brave wet leaves falling

sunlight in splintered shadows

life in black and white


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-10-24 06:26 PM


nice haiku

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-10-25 09:15 AM


icebox - it's been raining here for over a week, and the leaves are indeed wet. However, when the sun rises over the mountains they will glisten with a new day...

BC

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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2009-10-25 02:36 PM


Beautiful.
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-10-26 12:02 PM


The beautiful melancholy of autumn is so extremely well rendered here, dear Charlie.

Love,
Margherita


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2009-10-30 12:11 PM


If only life were that easy!
Nevertheless, it is a beautiful Autumn Day.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2009-10-31 08:04 AM


hoping to see that sunlight today~~

M

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